/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7102820
>>7102848
Aight thanks, fuck the police

>>4915198
Dude, your work is fine. You don't need to learn anything else, so don't let anyone here tell you otherwise.

>>4801641
>Nothing is precious. Just learn something. Improve incrementally. Use every tool you have.

>>3186926
Naa, tu inglés está bastante bien dentro de todo, pero aunque seamos fellow argentinians tendríamos que mantener la conversación en inglés para respetar el uso del board. Siempre lo vi como una regla implícita de convivencia en 4chan o algo así (aunque a veces no se siguen ni las reglas globales, para empezar)

Anyways, thanks once again, really, the fact that you took the time to actually paint over and write all of this is just... thank you so much man. I gotta get this done before thursday night and I was getting really stuck in this part of the process. I just realized I might be getting my gesture/action lines a bit mixed up (composition and legs kinda imply he's rising but hair, sword and jacket indicate an action coming towards us), you interpreted it better than I did so I'm going to try to figure that out to see if it needs any changes to make it all flow together and use everything you just told me about rocks and ki to aid it. I might know my Loomis and fundamental theories, but actual composition and objectively appealing aesthetic is the one thing that kills me, and something I appreciate of artists with much simpler and dynamic styles. Thanks again for the lengthy critique, sos lo más.

Thank you for the feedback on the leaves Crt. You are a swell fella.

>>3127752
Yeah, I get what you mean and I agree with you, I just didn't think the analogy was quite right. It somehow implies short stories aren't finished, and as such not valid.
I'd say it's more like those people who spend years 'writing' a single novel, but never quite finish it.