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I have a modern fantasy setting in mind, where instead of the usual thing where mystic elements are either hidden or appeared just recently, magic and technology existed together from the beginning of time.
I've been scared of starting any work about it for a few years already, always having an excuse of "i'll do it later once i'm actually good", but recently i got fed up with this fear and decided to do a bunch of short manga stories to explore the setting and practice writing and composing.
Here are some designs for the main character of the first story.

>>3567033
I can recommend Writing Excuses podcast, short 10 minute episodes with some interesting ideas about organizing and writing stories.

>>3564347
Create a test short webcomic (maybe like an intro to your actual story?), because the best way to become good at them is to actually do them.