/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4317644
Well, it depends on who you want to appeal to see which technique you'll use, as you said not everyone finds all art nice. Saying you like Kim, I can see your inspirations there in your drawing. Now think about what's different between your piece, and Kim's art, which is probably one of your goals if not THE goal.
Now I say you need to go through the whole learning process first mate, you're kinda jumping the shark here, think about what's different between Kim's drawing and yours; for starters, the detail.
As your drawing stands, it needs contrast. For example detail the clothes on the girl (I assume it's a kimono showing one breast?) But leave her skin white. And also detail the mannequin behind the guy on the left. To make some contrast between the humans and clothes / machines.

That's just an example, you might find something different by looking at Kim's work, and think of a different way to improve your piece.
But don't neglect your training, it's hard to make something appealing without the bases but it's nice to have fun every once in a while.
Kim can draw an old fat guy eating ice cream and make it appealing because he's trained his drawing a lot.