/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

(Dont mean to come off as harsh, or condescending I just trying to convey my honest thoughts)

SURFING
Louis >>6614922
Fenando art is polished and easily one of the best-looking comics but sadly not very memorable after I read it. killing the opponent feels like a replacement for creativity.
Loius's comic made both of the characters feel like characters rather than a prop of the other OC to make themselves look good with.

SHOOTING
Sgt. Chadwick >>6617547
> Caroline Anon did an amazing but it feels like she lacked presence to the point that she was eclipsed in her own comic by Sgt. Chadwick who is pure charisma and style.

TENNIS
Abby >>6613884
Ormand and Lustless were pretty forgettable not to mention that the Loomis heads made Ormard's submission amusing for all of the wrong reasons. Please take the time to erase your guidelines and to lustless anon a page submission just makes you look like you didn't try comparison to your partner.

BILLIARDS
Janitor >>6613666
Paulus submission was mostly illegible please type in your text. Janiton was my favorite OC from last year and he is one of my favorites again. nice to see the ongoing continuity with him.

STARCRAFT
Soil Repair Unit >>6612793
I feel like both of you guys got a topic that neither of you actually enjoyed but Amy doesn't feel like a character at all. Soil Repair Unit was wholesome and im interesting in seeing where you take him.

FIGURE SKATING
Leuca >>6612804 and Bernard
I wanted to root for Bellboy and Senna but leuca and Bernard really delivered on the content to the point that they were soundly defeated.

RACEWALKING
Decitron >>6612806
Tammy Mato could've done alot more. Decitron was more interesting overall

HUNTING
Femboy Elf and Kevin >>6615543
Captain tried too hard to appease to the 4chan crowd and Falcon didn't try at all. Femboy elf and kevin made the better content in the end.