/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3613270
This >>3613328
It take effort on my side to figuring out the picture, that's not a good thing.
You have to make sure a drawing can be easy on the eyes to follow.
I turned off my cintiq to play games so you will have to deal with shitty red line.
The main flow as you can see goes from top to bottom right, the horse interrupted it with it head, i suggest moving the horse's head to the stair.
As for the girl, let her body go along with the main flow too, don't stop it, her head can turn back to look at the knight but make her body turn to the left.