/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4831155
you're focusing too much on making pretty drawings. animate using gesture and lines of action first, and avoid making your poses look too forced. after your gesture pass is complete, start building up your drawings focusing on the principles of animation first. only at the end can you think about your pretty drawings.
i say this because your art looks alright, but the animation is stiff and boring. this tells me that you spent the majority of the time focusing on your drawings being nice and not properly focusing on animating said drawings. animation is NOT illustration, and shouldn't be treated as such.
lots of potential though