/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6409262
I applaud you for actually trying to finish something and not just grinding Loomis heads. The yellow dividing lines don't have perspective. They get smaller, which is good, but the ends should get narrower. See picrel. There's also usually a white line on either side of a highway, for the shoulder. Make a list and sit down and correct everything. Think of it as a process, like editing an essay paper.

I honestly think you should repaint this like 10, 20, maybe even 50 times, trying different colors and using references to get more realistic shapes for things in the environment. You'll also want to look at references for environment lighting. And I'd consider working on a gradient for the sky, perhaps? Look at different sunsets on an image search engine.