/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1612680
Yeah you are letting the construction hinder you by making it more important than other things such at 2d relationships and your value pattern.

Use a simpler construction and don't shade it based on the construction you put down, shade it based on the main forms and how it looks in your reference.

You are overstating many things because of the construction--this applies not only to your shadows, but also to contours. The far edge of her face is way to lumpy...it is likely much more simple than that.

Remember to keep it SIMPLE. Erase out your construction lines too if they are getting in the way of the image (as they currently are).