/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1813475
atleastthefeetarerightthistime/10

You have no variations in line weight making it look like the kind of thing a genuine autist on deviantart would make (I'm just telling it like it is, not trying to be insulting). That mask is in a awkward position and looks completely out of place, it doesn't fit in the picture to begin with (owing partially to the crown) but it also wouldn't be big enough form around the contours of his face even if it did. His clothing choice of half an extremely flat looking jerkin with metal shin plates and his featureless crotch hanging out is very unappealing. Also you didn't draw any sort of crotch, featureless or no you have no indicative lines that there is anything there and it almost looks like it's all a part of his sticking out from where his MUH DICK would be.

Nigga you need Loomis but perhaps more importantly you need some character design books.