/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3489060
Honestly, most of what you have is really good. There is really no need to throw it out, especially since you're really close to something cool.
None of my criticism concerns the posing. It has everything to do with animation fluidity and stiffness. Looking at specifically the torso for example, notice how it's stopping motion is only 2 frames. Nothing that moves that quickly should stop in two frames. Same argument can be made for the left arm.
On top of that, it seems like some sections of the body continue moving while attached to static portions. For example, the right leg's movement should influence the torso, and everything attached to it.
Again, you're really close. Just don't be afraid of having to draw more frames