/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Slowly rendering this starting with her body. Trying to figure out what objects to put around her to go with the wine glass that will her elevated hand; something that will actually be visible once the silk is properly shaded. What are some light weight fashion materials that are slightly transparent and light in color that I can drape her with? Any other suggestions you think I need to hear as I'm finishing this?

>>3356066
They look like they really lack volume, as if they're just completely flat. The one on the bottom right is the lesser of the evils and has a decent flow to it, but still very 2D. The subject matter reminds me of people in my old high school trying to draw anime OC, but that's more of a personal issue here. Even as sketches, I feel you should do better and learn to illustrate your figures in a 3-dimensional sense; better line control wouldn't hurt either.

>>3356037
I'm loving the colors. What media are you using? I'm not familiar with traditional painting so I don't think I can offer much useful advice considering application and such, but I feel the anatomy of the area around her clavicle should be more accurate given it's almost the focal point of the piece. Values are good besides the anomaly on her neck, seems to dark compared to the other parts of her upper body.

>>3355895
Sometimes, when I post on IG, I get very little feedback. I've always thought it was because my subject matter is niche stuff, something only impressive to someone interested in improving their own art, OR that I'm just fucking horrible. Without any comments or criticisms, I'm left to imagine whatever it could be.