/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2422253
>>2422040

Construction, placement of features is wrong. For example, in the top one, the mouth is too small, remember that the corner of the mouth should fall where the iris is (or center of the eye is the person is not looking straight ahead)

In the bottom one the eyes are not on the same level and the ear looks off too.

I had problems with the placement of the features too, I think you need to practice the planes of the head a little more, unfortunately in that book loomis gives the subject only a page without really telling you how to aproach it, he just goes "okay dipshit, this is a simple version of the planes, got that? now this is a more advance one. Right, lets move on". Just google for some planes of the head images, study them with the simple version loomis gives, then do the planes on skulls and from there start to incorporate the minor planes. Do it with reference and from imagination, you'll eventually get it