/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2742273
Very nice start! I think you can be a bit more consistent in your lighting--really think about what angle the light is coming from and whether each plane will be hit by the light or not. For example you put her face in darkness but based on the rest of the information of lighting and the way you did her hair in light, her facetoo would have more direct like on it. I think her head is sitting on her body a bit wrong too so I corrected that slightly, and the windows were looking a strange value so I darkened them as though it is nighttime.