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Ugly box rotations with no refs
>>6983481
Thanks, fren. The basis of my gesture drawing is mainly Vilppu and Hampton. Any “flowiness” might from paying more attention to rhythm through the limbs, trying to listen to what neco senpai was talking about in the threads a few weeks back. He said that my feet looked bolted on and the limbs weren’t very rhythmically in line with the rest of the figure. I’m still trying to work on that.
>>6983483
Oh, good job. Can we see?
>>6983492
No. Only people who repost copypasta and/or repetitively derail threads by bitching and baiting for (you)s without ever posting their work.
You can’t help the needy; there are too many of them. Instead, help the deserving.
>>6983504
:)
>>6983512
Excellent job, anon
>>6983535
That looks sick
>>6983537
Nah. You read the sticky, drew, posted your work. Verdict: GMI
>>6983608
>>6983613
For complex stuff like this, I’d plot out the perspective grid. At least until you’ve got it internalized like KJG. I’m probably retarded but I like 1 better. I think because in 3 you have the arm of the girl on the left overlapping too much of the end of the table. It makes it hard to read their position. It took a lot of staring to realize they were on opposite sides of a table. Version 1 is easier to read because the end of the table is more clearly visible. I think her body language is better in 3, if she’s meant to be defensive of the food, wolfing it down and kinda trying to shield it from the other girl. Pretty good foreshortening, but the girl on the right’s shoulder is disconnected from her torso. Or maybe you have her neck too far over to the side, as if rather than bending her neck, you just slid it over
>>6983612
I like the leg rhythms and shapes. Those calves and feet remind me of Bridgman. The knees looks bit… serrated for my taste. But overall great job.
>>6983610
Breddy gud hands and feet. W-what’s that girl doing?
>>6983621
Copy a book or do a course. Also, boxes are fine