/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7118736
I really like the anti-couterfiet touches with the red and blue circles, and am little jealous of people who can draw engravings. The hat is really the only detractor like this >>7118757
anon said.

>>7118739
How did you do the branches? Mask them off and do the background or vice versa? It's a really nice effect. I think the bird is ok, but could use some delineator between the body and head though I know when its cold out they can look like puff balls.

Here's a work in progress, I posted it in the draw thread and got no feedback, so I figued I post it here. The inking isn't finished yet, but any glaring issues I could still fix while it's in progress? This is on watercolor paper as I want to do some washes once the inking is complete. Excuse the shitty photo quality, I need to scan it for sure

>>7109216
About 75% done with the inking at this point. I think I've mitigated some of my ham-fisted line weights I started with. Anything I should address that I might not be seeing while I'm finishing up the hatching? Eventually this is going to get watercolors before calling it done.