/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3694218
1. Draw the damn heads. They’re part of the body and contribute to gesture
2. Those are really small, are you zooming in or drawing small? Because if it’s the latter then definitely go bigger.
3. I recommend roughly mapping out the ribcage with an egg shape.
4. Hips too, with a rectangle or egg or cylinder or whatever works
5. Use wrapping lines, they help quite a bit. See pic. You can do like 3-5 per body part, doesn’t have to be all over.
6. Don’t be afraid to spend a bit more time on these. I think you should, actually, so that you can learn how to gestures properly.
7. You have potential, ganbatte anon

>>3694284
Good advice, did you draw that? If you did you have a few things to work on but good on you for having the courage to post work here.

>>3689788
wrapping lines can help