/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6366650
There are a few problems imo. I agree with the other anon that her arms look too long (see rightmost).
There's also a balance issue, but I don't think it's the torso and legs.
While she would be unbalanced on this pose, it's a fairly common thing to draw girls in poses like these. I think the issue may be on the arms, it feels like you didn't know what to do with them, or at least with her left arm.
Also the legs are weird. One leg is bent so her left foot is higher than the other, but the perspective makes it seem like it shouldn't.
>>6366743
Yuzu's lower body feels estrange, as if it was dis-attached to her upper body.