/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2959734
(those two people are me)
>That's not how art works anon.
That's precisely how art works.
Deconstruct, analyze and understand the process.
Looking for mistakes and fixing them is literally the only way to get good at anything.

You can make things feminine, cute and soft without butchering your anatomy or using repulsive sausage shapes. See some of Glen Keane's work, or hell, even Vilppu himself. The thing is that unlike Toriyama, Keane got good at interpreting the real life before he delved into heavy stylization.

>>2959736
It doesn't have better fundamentals, which is the only thing you can judge objectively.

>>2959753
I have? Thanks for noticing, could you please point some of them out?

>>2959828
>bekkaliyev
Good taste.

Asymmetrical shapes on human body are created by active and passive muscle groups working against one another. A symmetrical form is stiff, because it's literally stiff - both muscles are either flexed or relaxed. I assume this is the same for men, women, apes and everything that has muscles on it.
I guess I should've added fat pads to her hips, although hiding some of the anatomy, it would have sold the idea better.

And oddly yes, I do plan on teaching figure drawing classes. My biggest influence is Hampton, but Vilppu and his "feeling of the form" makes your head go poof! once it starts to click.