/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Let's play a game, dads.
>Share one of your favorite pieces uploaded by a dad, and explain what's about it that you like. And if there's something you'd like to see this dad improve upon in their following work.

I'll start. Something I quite liked were the tiny strips for pages that Sugar was posting back in December. I like these not just because they have a very wondrous feel but they also bring me back to being a child and reading these very stylized comic adventures for kids in this child's magazine my grandpa would buy for me.
Some feedback I'd give would be to try having a more concise story, and to to making a small complete work from start to finish that could be equivalent to a fairy tale you'd tell a kid as they're going to sleep.

Let's play a game, dads.
>Share one of your favorite pieces uploaded by a dad, and explain what's about it that you like. And if there's something you'd like to see this dad improve upon in their following work.

I'll start. Something I quite liked were the tiny strips for pages that Sugar was posting back in December. I like these not just because they have a very wondrous feel but they also bring me back to being a child and reading these very stylized comic adventures for kids in this child's magazine my grandpa would buy for me.
Some feedback I'd give would be to try having a more concise story, and to to making a small complete work from start to finish that could be equivalent to a fairy tale you'd tell a kid as they're going to sleep.