/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4481642
basically, your details are confusing things, redlining in trad and overlaying is kind of dumb but here goes.
>big chunk of shadow hides the back of her butt, visibly shortening the leg
>big fold on the left hides the bottom of her thigh. showing it clearly going behind the calf is an easy way to add depth
>big tear on her pants ends up looking like kneecap
>folds should be headed towards the bottom of her kneecap which is causing them
it also looks like you thought about adding the seam, which would have been a good detail to add more info.