/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6269817
i cant see the pose you are trying to convey that well and im a CONSTRUCTGOD, so for normal coomers and non artist is gonna be harder, as a rule of thumb always make your work readeble, anyways is your pose the one at the top right? the gap in her legs is kinda big, her feets almost look like they are floating, face looks rally meh, like she just realized she forgot something, overall the pose makes her upper body really small/smashed, i cant feel the forms and action, needs more roomis