/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2893283
I would recommend that you'd flip. Also, the protags face in the first panel looks very smug, not distressed.

With the guard established as to how far away from MC is on the first panel, I would imagine him gaining enough momentum to catch him after he fell over. The distance of the two seems unchanged in the other chase panel, so I'd either change the distance of the first panel between the two or make the guard comical like as he's struggling to getting caught up (facial expression is important here).

The "textbox" thing that I mentioned would look good with colors of the background or a tone of mood.

One the hole, I didn't figure how he slid out of it, since the size of it made unclear.

I just noticed that the container door was open, so I messed up the order of progress in my explanation (discard that purple outlining). I would however mention that the angle of that first panel doesn't clearly emphasize the escape route and the oncoming "end of the line" at the end of the belt. If you isolate the MC, the container door, and the belt end (see pic related), you'll get more weight of the right side of the panel due to the building contra where the MC slid down from. Can consider cutting some of it, but that is a large nickpick from my end.

Good luck.