/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4644248
In my opinion, the sharp angle is aggravated by the huge pool of Jizz at the bottom that weight's down the whole picture and view. The lady should be the focus, but the pool of Jizz pulls your eyes away from her. Without a proper background, it looks like the entire thing is a sole object falling mid air.
You could simply enlarge the picture so its more focused on the girl and maybe tilt it a little bit so the angle is not that sharp, or crop part of the jizz pool. If you are going to keep the angle, at least draw some sort of background so it doesn't look like everything is floating mid air.

Giving some more contrast to you lines and colors will probably help. I think this drawing could also work in a pure black and white style, but that's up to you.