/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2902560
Oh well, here you go then. Tell me your opinion on the girl and what looks wrong to you, or this test won't fulfill its purpose.
Everybody else, please don't make unnecessary comments. I know everything already.

>>2887987
It's fine if it looks flat for now, I don't want to spend several hours working on the 3/4 portrait just to fuck it up, to be told how much it sucks, and how much of a fucking retard I am, like with the last weekend's Yuuka one (pic related). For now I'm going to practice on the girls that I don't have any feelings for, and gradually increase the complexity. Thank you for your corrections, I'll keep them in mind for the ones to follow.