/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6757767
GREAT STUFF ANON! First obvious issue is the arm from the girl on the left. It should be just a little bit longer (maybe I did it a bit too long, I got distracted for a second lol). Some people say the elbow should be at the navel's height, and of course the wrist at the crotch height point.

Aside from the arm, all of the rest is a matter of personal style, maybe their torsos are a bit to slim, I don't know, it is a very subtle detail territory. This looks great anon. Her head/faces are god-tier level.

>>6757439
To me this looks perfect anon. I don't know what to point out ass "off" honestly.

>>6757659
For what I know about Luffy's design, this is alright. I'm looking at gear 5's faces, maybe there you can add some detail to improve his face. I'm thinking redoing his hair with at least one wavy curl on the forehead. I think the hair is the key to make it look cool.