/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3142462

You're a better artist than me, although still posting this as a redline anyway since it might be useful to you and is a lot more credible than just a comment.

To me I feel like the weakest part of your pieces is your line-work. It looks too loose and scribbly in places. I think this happens when you don't pay enough attention to form (ie. 'feeling' it, or paying more attention to it in general), and when you haven't practiced making more confident/cleaner lines.

I realize there's a certain style you're going for, but if you practice drawing simpler, longer, more confident lines for a while, you might see some nice results. If you have life drawing classes nearby this would be a great thing to practice there, or you can probably make do with an online pose viewer. You can of course practice this as you draw normally, however life drawing is a better way of paying specific attention to a given problem like line-work.