/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2270782
Ok so this is a generic idea of things for the future. I was trying to get you to go bolder with your pic, with way thicker lines on the outside and clear shapes on the letters. I think I said something like making it sharper or more snappy, and I mean that like in the gesture and the shapes and inking, kinda all around. The style you have going on there seems like it would benefit from more bold aspects. It doesn't have to be as simplified as what I did here (and I forgot to draw a lot of things like his turtle shell, sorry) but hopefully this gets some of the idea across. I think the thing that most shows what I wanted is the text, although the placement could still be better. Anyway I wouldn't recommend trying things out on this unless you have a lot of time to redo it, but I hope you'll think about some of this on your next one.