/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I know I'm posting at peak dead hours, but what the fuck am I doing wrong with these 60 second gesture drawings? I've watched the first part of Michael Hampton's Analytical Figure drawing and read the first chapter of the book, I've also watched the Steve Huston videos and read the beginning of his book as well and I also watched and drew along with Vilppu's timed model drawing video.

I know you guys probably get posts like this all the time and gesture drawing is about the "feeling" so, you either just "feel" it or you don't until you understand it and then it makes sense, so, I understand if no one wants to comment but I would really appreciate it.