/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3974253
I'm going to be completely honest and say that I can't really put into words exactly why I think your lines look off. I do not like western art styles, but I feel like even ignoring my own personal biases there's still something wrong with them.

Are you using vector-based software like Flash or Illustrator to draw your lines? One thing I am noticing is that a lot of your stokes look the same, they start out thin, get thicker around the mid point and thin out again at the end, no matter whether the form you're trying to describe actually calls for this sort of thin-thick-thin stroke or not. Take the tail, the cleavage or the hair as examples; the lines should technically continue behind the shape that is obstructing them, but the strokes thin out immediately at the point of obstruction which works against the form.

I'm curious what your sketches look like before you get to the cleanup stage.