/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2526144

>>2510110

I like it, but.

Sword is stupid looking, it has a very long grip for such a tiny length of blade. Its also got paddle syndrome, make it thinner. Even if your going for thick powerful cleaver make it thinner then what you have.

I love the screaming faces armour, but the one that stretches from the shoulder to the chest looks stupid, even if its flexible how the hell does he lift his arm.

Helmet should have some breath holes if he isnt a skeletal man. Its also very a restrictive view, you don't go for helmets like that unless the rest of your body is also protected in plate. Helmets that minimize view slits are also more for lancers then foot combat.

Horizontal gaps are also way better then vertical in every way, easier to see through no harder to get a dagger or arrow through.


I like the beasty and skeletal king.