/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2257685
the response seems asshole-tier but they're pretty correct with that one. it's hard to critique anatomy and details when your image offers none. Unless you're going for a specific style-- and I'm going to guess your technique is due to skill rather than style-- then work on refining the details in this picture. I want to say you have a good idea going, but it's a sketch at best.

However, I'm gonna see if I can analyze what's going on-- she's hopping forward, or falling down? Either way, unless she's moving upward somehow, like in the middle of a wave dash [see: any fighting game, especially Smash Bros], the tips of her hair would not be pointing downward. Her open dress suggests air moving under her as if she's landing... but again, tips of the hair. It's artistic and fancy and maybe it can be ignored for some anime weeaboo trash but I'm gonna ask you to aspire to more, and get the direction of her movement, and the result of it, correct. As it stands there's too much, and yet too little, information about what she's doing.

Try this again, but without shading. And on unlined paper.