/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5047370
most of the inside strokes were me trying to find the landmarks that michael hampton describes after the gesture was put down. Unless you dont mean those ones around the chests and groins. This is another of the same warmup where I didn't try to do that. Is it still too many lines? Should the limbs be less defined? I do feel like I'm drawing the shape too much. Thanks for replying with meaningful criticism anon