/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6686274
This is nowhere near "finsihed." Fix the hand. Fix the torso. Move the belly button left. Broaden the pelvis. Remove one of the bras so that she only wears one, like a normal person would. Move the shoulder strap closer to the neck. Fix the folds of fabric under the belly button, I have no idea what these are. After that, fix the hair, it's very thick and heavy and therefore it wouldn't float so freely and widely, it'd be pulled way down. Also fix the shape of the forearm that you hid behind her back because you didn't want to draw the hand.

If you do this, it'll be "finsihed." At this point the drawing is about on par with your spelling.
>>6685845
go to the video course general, download 5 gb of hand references, you'll have around 800 pictures to reference. dont just put in lines hoping they'll be right if you do it enough times, it's not worth the time investment