/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2831094
Robot anon here, and although I am still educating myself in the animes myself I can tell you that what you need is proper fundamentals. Try checking out Fun With a Pencil it is actually very forgiving for what you're trying to do. But with other than that I do have some specific tips I can give you:
1: Your heads might have a little bit too much at the top. Try shortening them a bit.
2:You are not hue shifting nor changing the saturation your colors when you darken them, which makes them look dead and lifeless especially for the skin. Skin actually reddens and gets more saturated the darker it gets because of how the light enters the skin and reflects some of the red from the blood when it bounces back out. Most of the time (when the sun isn't down or is in sunset or sunrise) the sun emits a bright yellowish white light. Basically, what colors when exposed to light will go towards yellow white on the color wheel and the colors that are darker and in shadow will go towards blueish purple (because of the ambient blue light of the sky). If this sounds confusing, watch these videos and try color picking photographs or color pieces that you like the colors in. Be sure to watch the color box and color wheel when you do this and notice the direction the color picker in both them change towards. You will be suprised in how the actually move.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o3NhiGKgd14&t=1216s Check this one out first, most important one
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alx-H_Rmpvw Check this one out for colors that don't burn your eye out.
Extra stuff but really really helpful.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P0EWfmtuCLg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zbDVlDpIww