/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg, few more pages of loomis left. Initially i wanted to skip them, but i really liked the drawings on the last few pages so i will grant loomis 1 more session. LOOMIS!

>>6966497
i dont see anything wrong. think less, draw more
>>6966491
apart from beg elbow and very typical beg nose it is kinda competent, you even felt the form and face is human like
>>6966483
i dont know what you are referring to, but HRB is the most basic brush in digital software. Even MS Paint has it: fully opaque, has shape of circle and does nothing else. Soft round is just HRB, but it has opacity on. Typically linked opacity to how much you press with the stylus
>>6966464
you can also simply clean up your photos before uploading. GIMP is free and shitton of filters for just that. also somehow your blooks are better than mine
>>6966435
https://archive.org/details/Keys_to_Drawing
>>6966389
yes, even still objects have gesture, but unlike living things, nobody will ever try to crab your drawing of a chair saying it looks stiff and or unnatural, so making gesture of a chair is little redundant
>>6966321
>line weight with pen pressure
i actually have just that + transparency. if you zoom in you can see the faint lines i used for construction
>rushing your practice
i have no excuse, sometimes i bleed on canvas and the results are bloody. atm i am not focused on appeal, i am just trying to breach into construction
>>6966272
yes, since i started my permabeg journey i took multiple photos because i wanted to draw the scene later (i never did this before - taking photos of scenery nothing)
>>6966215
that ass is very sad like anti-coom type of ass
>>6966005
stop using soft brush for shading, be more confident with lines and that ass and legs are completely flat
>>6965954
no matter how many times i will see this i dont think its possible to bend legs like that
>>6965732
it is okay to use transform to make that fairy small, but you have to redo the linework so they are as thick as on the dude