/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2295162

Thanks for the tips anon

>>1788739
Head is fucked up. Too long at the back, slightly tilted as well. Looks like an alien. Also, too small.

Nose is too low, but might be forgivable if she is supposed to be a monster girl.

Hair has no physics. I do understand all too well where you were trying to go with it, but even then you could improve it.

In general, not enough motion. More gestures.

Foreshortening could use some work.

Right shoulder is fucked up.

Why didn't you draw the feet?

Ears could be bigger and more exaggerated, you should also try connecting them to the skull. Make it look more organic. Could be through a hair-clip, or to root it to the skull.

>Boxing glove is clipping through her torso.

You need to shade. Otherwise, her lef t boobs disappears into the horizon. She looks like she has an uniboob.


But still, you have the basics of form construction down, your lines are clean, you can draw something which the general public will appreciate. It's pretty, it's fun, shows some effort and improvement.

Next step should be shading and anatomy. And it's much, much easier than you think, so don't be overwhelmed.