/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3852519
>I don’t wanna turn the faces into blobs with microscopic, idealized anime noses and mouths.

that wasn't my intention, rather i was trying to show you that by using LOOMIS you could have a basic understanding of proportions regardless of the style you chose except for SD, thats why i drew these two heads which are using literally loomis , and by eyes not being in the center i mean is a landmark to keep the proportions right, the point where you draw the eyes is right in the middle of the face, technically just trace a line vertically and in the middle is where you should place the eyes this is mostly for young people, in adults the middle point is the base and you draw the eyes above this point then again it's just a landmark.
if you draw huge eyes but you keep some proportions of an adult person like big jaws, looks really off

>>2930457
here this is better, it's based on loomis

>>2912111
Start with learning to draw the head. The head in your image looks like shit.