/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6749011
>Kevin
Kevin's progress here is brutal. A dark descent in madness ending with a fate worse than death: corporate life. You delivered so much: an awesome fight (Kevin's silhouette with red shadows was incredible), gruesome deaths, but also CG's heartrending last moments, which made me feel terrible. The bonus content was super extensive too.
>Kevin meeting Scrimblo (He doesnt die I think)
>next drawing is Kevin holding Scrimblo's bloody corpse
kek

>Abstain
Animators time to shine! Nice fight choreography, voice acting(!) and many memorable shots. Must have your wrists on fire after all that.

>Carolyn
Barely ever played an FPS in my life, this was my first experience with DOOM. Chuckanon was kind enough to give me many tips and explain me how to activate God mode :] (What?... I had my comic to work on!), I got around beating it fair and square a few days ago. Many aspects of the game to praise: Beautiful spritework (Carolyn's daughter), Chuckson's lines are hilarious, the level design expresses the story very well.
We Eldritch got the privilege to witness Carolyn's masterpiece in the making, and she was kind enough to break Turtloli's staff for me. Beautifully tragic story, with incredible writing and paneling, her version of the events was harrowing and humane.
Different medium, different expectations... Chuckson lost a ballsy gamble, but he earned my respect: you can't imagine my surprise and pleasure when I saw the words "ARE YOU A BAD ENOUGH DUDE TO BLAST YOUR WAY OUT OF CAROLYN'S FACEHOLE?"

>Bear
I love your personal vision of the tourney: the artificial Crabcity, the contestants waiting in a bar, the random locomotive and crowns... and how you portrayed Turtloli training with the Eldritchs and Chuckson, so sweet and comfy. I did notice that in your submissions, Bear slowly became more and more jaded, that got me believing he really was going to shoot the girl in the end. Good luck for the one-shot!