/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2210060
i literally spent an hour trying to give you a red line but in the end like a fucking faggot i forgot to save making me hate myself, fuck you for that so ill do it on pencil. DISCLAMER I"M TRASH..k, you need to do more basic shapes and forms her back looks like an old accordion everything is too close, her pose looks super uncomfortable but its nice to see you trying to push yourself, add mass to where the muscles would pile up together its sexy~, be careful of lines that create tangents because they become confusing= her boobs and her right(?) arm kinda blend together, don't bend the knees so hard they look broken (unless its a fetish) ayy i realize you're adding perspective to yours but still its a mess, gambate figgoot~