/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i'm trying to design some cultist-ish character as an exercise in stylization, particularly after looking at moby francke's work for a bit the other day. I'm trying to not go into 'generic edgy zealot' territory like a lot of cultists media appear and to be honest i'm really liking where this sketch is going but i guess i'm mostly just throwing ideas at the wall to see what sticks, feedback would be appreciated