/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3890646
Does this look expressive enough to you? I accomplished it by detailing the eyes and lips a bit. Besides doing the eyes and brows, there's a line between them symbolizing the eye socket, and there's also the markings that form between the brows, AND the markings that form under the eyes. Here I drew those lines under her eyes to depict a negative emotion, but a smile for example pushes the corners of the eyes and mouth a bit.
And as I said, it adds some element of 3D to draw the mouth with lips. Some people just draw the mouth as 1 simple line, but it's quite easy to add another line for the lower lip.

This is all assumming you find it expressive but I can't help much more than that.