/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4915330
Not the other anon but I somewhat agree with their assessment. Genuinely trying to help here. You construct but your forms and volumes end up too simple or abstracted, there's no rythm no breaks and they don't feel like they are standing in space. You do get fluidity so you are doing fine at gesture, but you lack rigidity now, thus why they are telling you construction. Also you have to understand what your lines mean, again, try to abstract less. I'll leave you 5 min gestures I did as an example although I'm not that great myself I hope it might exemplify what I mean. Don't take it as me showing off because I ain't.. Check how I try to use curves and straight lines, break things up when I need too.
I dunno when you say two years what it really means, like how much actual time you spend? Track your time if you do an hour here and there and skip days or have other things to take care off 2 years doesn't really mean anything. You'll go crazy if you don't really keep track of the actual of this. It will skew your perception of progress.