/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4908536
quick answer you need more loomis and feel the form. you obviously lack your fundies your anatomy is beg tier, not like im advanced but you are missing a lot of things everywhere, lets focus in the head, you are missing the eyesocket's depth which also visually changes the distance of the eyebrows with relation to the eyes depending on the angle,the eyes look flat for that angle also their shape is very simple and it does't show too much form, the ear is way too far in the back of her head which also affects the position of the neck having the same problem, the hair needs some work too but thats a whole different matter just like the anatomy.