/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

hey anons, here's a page of work and some feedback (take this with a grain of salt!)

>>4124736
legs and chest rendering feel weird. fabric doesn't get highlights like that unless the character is wearing something sheer, like leggings, but because of the thickness im fairly sure that's not what you're going for.

>>4123828
use less lines, do lines more quickly. You can redo lines over and over in digital, take advantage of that. Things that should flow together don't and things that shouldn't flow together do. also, try to understand what you're drawing a bit better. No traps, really big arms, misplaced breasts, etc.

>>4123222
that elbow is way too clean of a curve, especially with fabric, feels weird.... your drapery doesn't read