/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg. Yesterday i didnt draw because i was archiving old youtube videos before they remove inactive accounts. Today i drew.

>>6660482
i kneel
>>6660466
observation, perspective, line control, feeling the form, gesture, figures, color theory, rendering, composition, appeal... there are many different fundies and you kinda need them all to get anywhere.
>>6660354
render the bar she is lying her hands on lmao. like this it looks like she is hovering in space. it is okay to blurry background but her hands are literally touching a table. That table cannot be "background"
>>6660295
the rabbit is dope. the background not so much
>>6660265
this could outright go into some comic or video games. pro tier
>>6660152
i kneel
>>6660119
there arent enough value differences on the forms. the contour hatching is saving it but you want the values to work as well. Look at how dark the outline is. Why isnt a single surface on her as dark as that outline? You drew the hair as it is a solid form, you probably dont want to do that, do some studies of hair.
>>6660042
coomable
>>6659943
yes, they are very easy to fuck up and even easier to spot the mistakes
>>6659939
the comic has too much text for my taste but art wise i like it a lot
>>6659779
soul
>>6659709
you get slightly faster every time you draw
>>6659692
superb! i kneel
>>6659607
cute
>>6659486
when you are drawing humans in 99% cases all you need is to make them proportional to the bakground. Aka if there are doors or windows or car somewhere, you need to use perspective to find out the height of the figure relative to the door height. Like this https://archive.org/details/PerspectiveMadeEasy/page/n99
If you want to be hardcore about it, look up framed perspective volume 2, there they put whole body into cube
>>6659469
all i see is noise. i believe CSP has multiple noise generators. just put the noise into new layer and make it like 80% transparent
>>6659422
PYMW (post your moms work)
>>6659082
happy and soulful doggo