/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4301521
>>4301525
Construction aside, you need to train your observational drawing more. The fact that the heads all facing in different directions than the reference indicates to me that you had an "idea" of the pose and drew from that idea in your head rather than fully utilizing the reference.

After placing a major mass, like the head, use that as a point of reference to map out where key points would be. Like trench coat man, using the head as a point of reference, I know the top of the head lines up with the base of his fingers. Using the hand behind his head, if I drop a line straight down, I know where his big toe will touch the floor.

With the running woman, the green shows how you can use negative space to check.

This is not to make you a xerox machine but to help you self assess yourself.