/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

So I'm following this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QBv5z0Y2odE
Because I found the guys face anatomy videos really helpful.
What I want to know if the advice here is actually good. I can't tell because up until now I've been doing the Loomis ball and plain.

For what it's worth my end girl is more stylised 'web comicy, anime hybrid' look rather than photo realism. I do understand the importance of learning realistic anatomy and proportions though.

Pic related is me at his 'stage 2'. My pen control is still atrocious.

>>3863967
I like the body shape. It looks pretty stylised so I don't see any faults jumping out right away but I'm /beg/er than you so

>>3864212
I feel like the bottom half of her head is angled differently to the top half. Like if you got a rubix cube and twisted half of it 10 degrees.