/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Thu Jul 27 02:45:20 2017 No.3075467 [View]
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>>3075370
It's p cute. Excellent doge. However, as it is now, the "Murder" gets lost in the visual noise of the hair. Color should help alleviate that, but it might be worth considering simplifying part of the hair so the text has a better time standing out. Or scooching around the text itself, possibly referencing ads or something for more ideas on composition. Also, the "M" leaving the page kinda needs the figures to also be touching the edge(s).

And of course, a good way to test the readability of text is to check the thumbnail.

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