/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Sup friends, first time I've posted, because I've not really been confident enough to post at all. I whipped this one up to try and work on colors, but I really hate my lines. They're chicken scratchy, but even when I draw longer lines, they just look kinda soulless. No matter how hard I try to copy a style, it just goes back to this. Any books I might read on linework? I understand I need to do my fundies a lot more too, but I only started drawing about 4 months ago, and am only getting serious about it now.

Any tips would be greatly appreciated, though!