/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2696175
I did a repaint for you, but it isn't the best, but basically, you're supposed to be painting the values to pronounce the forms around the pear and the apple. The shadows/mid tones/highlights should fit around the pear and apple, while yours makes it flat. Your textures also seem to be just "painted on" instead of following the form of the object, as shown in the apple. Basically think about the form you are painting and lay it down as a 3D object and not 2D object.